Aug 7, 2018 13:11
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French term

Avoir un tempérament commercial

French to English Bus/Financial General / Conversation / Greetings / Letters
Hi,

I need some help, I need to translate this expression in english:"avoir un tempérament commercial", in context of a job offer. The candidate needs to "avoir un tempérament commercial".

I tried "to have a commercial disposition", but I don't know if it's right. To me having a commercial temper, could not be the right one, and what about "having a business character"?

Well, I can't manage to find the right one by myself, so I'm asking for some help.

Thank you for your answers.
Change log

Aug 7, 2018 13:50: writeaway changed "Field" from "Marketing" to "Bus/Financial" , "Field (write-in)" from "Commercial" to "(none)"

Discussion

Isabelle HOSTE (asker) Aug 16, 2018:
Thank you so very much to all of you, all of your answers have been very helpful and led me to better understand how to use those different terms according to context.

Wishing you a nice day and all the best!
Kevin Oheix Aug 7, 2018:
"Have/demonstrate natural aptitude in sales" - the actual meaning here, in my opinion.

"Skilful salesperson" - this would mean "avoir la fibre commerciale".
Isabelle HOSTE (asker) Aug 7, 2018:
It is for a salesperson.
writeaway Aug 7, 2018:
Is this homework or some kind of test?
Marco Solinas Aug 7, 2018:
To: Asker What is the job being offered?

Proposed translations

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to be commercially-minded; to be a natural saleman/woman

Tons of possibilities depending on register. "Commercial" describes something to do with sales, generally, although "business" can be a good option, depending on context.

The term "tempérament" is a little unusual. It refers to a type of personality or characteristic. I think that is something important to bring out, whatever choice you make.

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saleSman/woman
Peer comment(s):

agree writeaway : or just good business sense. apparently this is a job ad.
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agree Tony M
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agree David Hayes
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agree Kevin Oheix
6 hrs
agree GILLES MEUNIER : parfait
16 hrs
agree Carolina Bruil : Robin75
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4 KudoZ points awarded for this answer. Comment: "Thank you so very much, your answer helped me a lot!!"
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French term (edited): tempérament commercial

business acumen

Note from asker:
Thank you so very much!! Your answer was very helpful too!!
Peer comment(s):

neutral Tony M : Could work, although it would help to know what kind of job this is: if it's a simple salesperson in retail, this might be a bit OTT. / OK, now we now it is just for a sales job, I think this is perhaps less suitable than for, say, an entrepreneur...
6 mins
I think you are probably right, Tony ;)
agree Jennifer White : Yes, or maybe "have a head for business"?
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Thank you, Jennifer!
agree philgoddard
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Thank you, Phil!
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have a business temperament

I think the literal works fine.

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https://smallbusiness.chron.com/temperament-types-leadership...
Peer comment(s):

neutral Tony M : I can't help feeling 'tempérament' is a faux ami here — surely it has more the sense of 'mentality', 'way of thinking'? / I'm not suggesting it isn't; simply that it is a different usage in THIS context.
3 mins
Your comment is bogus, since this phrase is quite common in the business world.
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salesmanship

Now we have a bit more context, I think this is the kind of term that would probably be more likely to be used in an EN candidate profile.
Of course it is the wrong part of speech (FR is often constrained to add a verb that isn't always necessary in EN), so you'd have to work harder to fit it into the wider context, depending on the other items listed and how you've translated those.

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I think the use of the rather unusual term 'tempérament' here is something of a faux ami — a real trap to snare the unwary. Surely the FR term as used here has more the sense of 'mentality', 'way of thinking' than is normally associated with the EN word?
In other contexts, I can see that might be appropriate ('the right temperament to be a leader', etc.), but in the specific instance here, I don't think that really fits at all.
Peer comment(s):

agree Nikki Scott-Despaigne : Yes, an obvious term actually. Good 'un. I agree with your explanation of how to read and use "tempérament".
2 hrs
Thanks a lot, Nikki!
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have a business attitude/mindset

Essential here to see that it's something being asked for by an employer
Peer comment(s):

neutral Tony M : Yes, but for a post of salesperson, I don't really think 'business' is the appropriate term; remember in FR 'commerce' is 'selling things', and 'business' is 'entreprise'
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Commercial temperament

At the risk of sounding too cynical, "tempérament commercial" strikes me as a euphemism: "Must not be averse to high-pressure sales tactics". But whether or not I'm reading to deeply between the lines here, the English term "temperament" seems to carry the same connotation.

So why not take the direct route and go with "commercial temperament"?
Peer comment(s):

neutral Tony M : As I have said before, I believe there is a subtle but important difference in the way 'temperament' is used bwteen FR and EN; in addition, 'commercial' in EN doesn't have the same connotation of 'sales' it has in FR.
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I agree with you for 'commercial' (too vague in English), but 'temperament' in a sales context implies doggedness in either language. And that's the implication that matters, I think.
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